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Welcome to Brainstorm's Corner, a monthly springboard showcase. A springboard, basically a one-page prose summary of a comic book story, is the format used for submitting stories to companies such as DC Comics. In one page, a writer must describe the plot while also trying to make it as intriguing as possible. It's quite a challenge!
Brainstorm's Corner gives YOU, the reader, the chance to critique the story before a writer sends it off to every editor at DC. So let Fanzing know
would you pay to read this? If not, why not?
Batman,
future evolution
by "Joekerr"
Everyone knows that Batman was
created in 1939, everyone also knows that Batman isn't a sixty
years old caped crime fighter. Why might you ask? The Batman has
constently evolved, his origins updated, and with DC comics parrallel
Earth concept explained this evolution. This lead Batman to become
a daylight super cop, an inter-planetary crusader, a psychotic
vigilante and a obsessed crime fighter. Each era has it's Batman,
the forties had the gun fighting Batman, the sixties a camp crusader,
the 70's had the world's greatest detective. This reflection on
the character's past lead me to an observation on how the future
Batman will look and be updated.I had that idea of doing some
character's new designs and storylines last year, when the Batman
special (with a Batman for the new millennium contest) was released
and that I've heard from John's Byrne Batman/ Superman generations,
and the news of Batman beyond. all those things together lead
me to imagine the future of Gotham city, the world of BATMAN:
2939
The Setting:
After the war
After the second Galactic war,
the sucessfull forces of Earth we're badly damaged, Metropolis,
Gotham, Gateway, they were all destroyed, one corporation was
able build a new home for mens and womens, this is how the first
Giant Tower-city was built, on the spot where the City of Gotham
once stood. This new future was the creation of Metropolis first
citizen, Lex Luthor IV. twenty years passed,
Three Giant Tower-city were built after Gotham, Metropolis, Keystone
and Gateway. Th rest of our planet now is a giant garden, used
tofeed the citizens of the giant towers. Lex corp is nowm the
possesion of Lex Luthor V.
Gotham
Tower: just like the old one
Gotham tower, the first human
construction to ever be fused with our natural satellite. Even
for a gigantic construction, this tower still is the first one
ever to be built. Everything is low-tech. Crime is rampant because
criminal elements stayed in Gotham when construction was finished.
All this makes Gotham look like the city wich she's built on,
hell on Earth.
Characters:
Batman:
Bruce Wayne, life-support controller?
Bruce's parents were murdered by an agent of Gotham
Tower's mob boss. He had no money and no Alfred to take care of
him. Still he was able to learn an important quantity of Martial
arts, and dectective skills. But these skills are not enough in
the world of 2939. You need more protection, you need to be strong
enough to stop venom enhanced criminals, you need a headquarters,
you need the impossible. Bruce found the impossible. When Bruce
single handedly saved the life of Gotham's mayor, he made him
the new city life-support controller, a easy job with lots of
power and connections. With his new status, Bruce was able to
build himself equiment and a super-costume able to strike fear
in the hearts of criminals. To make himself scarier, Bruce made
his costume so he looked like a giant bat, an animal long forgotten,
destroyed a thousand years ago. Thus was born the Batman.
Robin:
Dick Grayson, Street-punk!
Batman had been wounded, young Dick Grayson had
witnessed his parents murder at the hands of the same man who
was about to kill Batman. With his almost forgotten aerial performer
skills young Dick saved Batman, Batman saw that they're was potential
in the young boy, and made him his partner. Batman even revealed
his identity to the kid, he later adopted Dick.
Joker:
Jack Napier, a boxer turned into a mass-murdering clown
Jack Napier was a old has-been boxer when a mob
boss forced him to test a new prototype drug. Jack was drastically
mutated into the Joker. This Joker can be invisible and he can
fight Batman to a standstill thanks to his drug enhancement!
This is all for Gotham 2939, if you have any questions on my concept, just e-mail me!
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submission guidelines (available here thanks to Jon Karl Franklin
Haynes).
All Characters are DC Comics
This proposal is © 1999.
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